Part 2: The Arising Of ACP- Part V (8-9)
Last time, on The Arising Of ACP:
- PMII got into the building of ACP and is setting a bomb off! (From now, I will use roman numerals for my chapters)
The Arising Of ACP- Chapter VII (8):
” WE NEED BACKUP! I REPEAT, WE NEED BACKUP!” Was the constant shouts of the UMA soldiers as the ACP, IW, Nachos and LT allience, known as the Elemental Allience (ACP stood for Earth, IW stood for water, Nachos stood for fire and LT stood for snow). “Wow, Johney’s got us in a victory!” The standing commander muttered- the 2ic StanderTanderLander. UMA was down to 20 men, and were considering a tactical nuke- ACP were thinking the same. “We are trying to charge the nuke- its gonna be launched in 2 minutes! HOLD BACK!” Base Command ACP and UMA Eagle (Both were the same job) threw their voice into the microphone. “Stander! UMA are going to launch the nuke the same time as us! We’re done for!” A skilled ACP spy reported. Stander was the branch leader of the Spy Division as well as Standing Commander- as Johney was trying to kill PMII. “NUKE IS LANDING IN TEN! GET TO NUCLEAR SHELTERS!” Base Command yelled as the Elemental Allience got into the jeeps and drove off. Suddenly, there was a huge explosion behind Stander- it was the two nukes.
The Arising Of ACP- Chapter 9:
“Move, and I will kill you.” Johney said, holding a Walther P3S at PMII’s head. “You will listen to me, and answer all my questions truthfully, otherwise I will kill you, as said.” The penguin said. PMII had finally been caught, after 2
hours. “Have you been funded coins to make bots?” Johney whispered. “Why is it any of your bees wax?” PMII replied, ticked off att the fact that Johney is trying to kill him. “Pink Mafias The Second… TELL ME NOW! OR PREPARE TO DIE! YOU HAVE 5 SECONDS TO CHOOSE!” Johney shouted, punctuating every word and increasing his voice at every word also. “Fine, yes, I was funded, NOW LEAVE ME ALONE!” PMII admitted finally. “Ok, help me defuse this bomb, or die.” Johney stared. PMII, while aghast, went to the bomb…
I hope you enjoyed this part. But did YOU enjoy this part?
-Coolto5, CPASC writer
Coolto5(2nd): Well- I can’t be bothered to make myself write 4 paragraphs all over again so instead I might as well not bother doing anything about it.
Splashy: You silly moo. I’m not gonna get mad at you, I just thought you weren’t in the correct position to do something like that. If Blue’s fine with it, I am too. Sorry bout that, go put it back in =)
Blue1: Actually Coolto, I was perfectly alright with what you posted.
Coolto5: It wasnt a delibirate bossing about- I just put it in there for examples of good stories, and I know this edit/posting/orange thing/whatever you wanna call it will make everyone as mad as hell- and fire me- Go ahead and get mad at me.
Splashy edit - Coolto, part of your post is missing for this reason – I do not think you are in the correct position to tell people how to write a good story. When you’re Head, you can do that. I deleted that part of the post because of my thoughts. Next time, please do not do that. I have put you back on as Author. Coolto5: No need for this this edit then! I wanna cross it out but I can’t bring myself to do it xD.
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